Elsie+Locke+2011

__Tuesday 14 June 2011__

“Beep beep” the alarm clock bussed. “shut up” moaned Kate as her hand hit the snooze button. She was just about doze off when her mum shouted “Kate it’s time to get up now” “can I just have ten more minutes” “no!” her mum yelled back as she walked into Kate's room. Mum looked at Kate snug as a bug in a rug and ripped off her duvet. She left and Kate slowly sat up. “I wished we had a day off today” she said as she gradually made her way out of bed.

When she had woken up and got dressed she went down stairs. She glanced up at the time “oh no I've only got ten minutes until the bus comes.” Sounding worried. She quickly put all off her books and lunch in her bag. “Have you eaten breakfast yet” asked mum “theres no time” replied Kate in a hurry. While running down the street to bus stop the bus speeded straight past her without noticing. She stood there looking annoyed, then she quickly sprinted back home.

“Mum mum I missed the bus can you give me a ride” They both ran to the car. “Oh no” “what mum” “I don’t have any petrol you'll just have to bike to school “fine” replied Kate. She quickly got out the car and ran into the garage.

She found her bike and started peddling. She peddled along the street as fast as she could, but suddenly she heard something strange it was like a small bang and then she felt the bike sinking. Kate had a puncher. “Thats great” she said to herself in a sarcastic tone.

Kate tied her bike up to a fence and started to walk. While she walked along the street, she felt something fall on her shoulder she didn’t notice and then carried on, Suddenly a huge rain drop fell on top of her head then it start pouring down. Walking miserably in the pouring rain Kate wished a car would come and take her home to her nice and warm bed.

After time her feet became sore and she stopped on a bench for a rest. While having a rest a huge truck rushed past and a going in an enormous splash of water came rushing towards Kate and drenched her in water. “aaahhhhhhh” she screamed as the cold muddy water soaked into her uniform.

She grabbed her jumper out of her bag and wiped her face and arms. “eww” Kate said as she wiped the mud from her face, then put her jumper away. She thought it would be better to start walking than stand there drenched in water.

Walking along the street Kate could see the school in the distance. It was only a little further to walk. As she arrived she thought to her self that it was very quite for a normal school day. She rushed to the office thinking she was late, but no one was there. After wondering around for a bit Kate spotted the principle walking to his office “Hello Mr Diver” He looked a bit confused and replied “Why are you here” “Im a bit late and I went to the office but no one was there so I’m going to class” He laughed and said “It’s teacher only day today didn’t you get a letter home” showing her the notice” Kate looked very embarrassed and asked if she could use the phone. “If you want I could drop you home” suggested Mr Diver “thanks” Kate replied. They both got into the car and drove back to Kate’s house.

__Monday 13 June 2011__

“Beep beep beep” the alarm clock bussed. “shut up” moaned Kate as smashed her hand on the alarm clock. Kate was just about to go back to sleep when her mum shouted “Kate it’s time to get up now or you’ll be late for school.” “It’s only 6:30 can I just have ten more minutes” “no!” her mum yelled back as she was walking into Kates room. Mum looked at Kate half a sleep in her bed and ripped off her cosy covers and told her again to get up. She left and Kate slowly sat up. “I wished we had a day off today” as she gradually made her way to get dressed.

When she had probally woke up and got dressed she headed down stairs. She glanced up at the time “oh no i’v only got ten minutes until the bus comes.” Sounding worried. She quickly rushed about putting her books and lunch in her bag. “Have you eaten breakfast yet” asked mum “theres no time” replied Kate in a hurry. While running down the street to bus stop the bus wizzed straight past her without noticing. She stood there looking annoyed, then she quickly ran back home to her mum.

“Mum mum I missed the bus can you give me a ride” They both sprinted to the car. “Oh no” “what mum” “I don’t have any petrol you'll just have to bike to school “fine” replied Kate. She quickly got out the car and headed to the garage.

Once she had eventually found her bike and was off. As she was heading out she saw the time was 7:30 and you have to be in school by 8:00. She peddled up and down the hill as fast as she could, but suddenly she heard something strange first it was a small bang and then she felt the bike sinking. Kate had a puncher. “Thats great” she said to herself in a sarcastic tone.

When she was just about to start walking she felt something fall on her shoulder she didn’t notice and then carryed on, Suddenly a huge rain drop fell on top of her head from then it start pouring down. Walking miserably in the pouring rain Kate a car would come and take her home to her nice and warm bed.

After time her feet became sore and she stopped on a bench for a rest. While having a rest and huge truck rushed past going in a puddle instantly an enormous wave came rushing towards Kate and drenched her in water. “aaahhhhhhh” she screamed as the cold muddy water soaked into her light blue uniform.

She grabbed her jumper out of her bag and wiped her face and arms. “eww” Kate said as she wiped the mud from her cheeks, then put the jumper away. She thought it would be better to walk to school than stand there drenched in water.

Walking along the street Kate could see the school in the distance. It was only a little further to walk. As she arrived she thought to her self that it was very quite for a normal school day. She rushed to the office thinking she was late, but no one was there. After wondering around for a bit Kate spotted the principle walking to his office “Hello Mr Diver ” He looked a bit confused and replied “Why are you here” “Im a bit late and I went to the office but no one was there so I’m going to class” He laughed and said “It’s teacher only day today didn’t you get a letter home” showing her the notice” Kate looked very embarrassed and asked if she could use the phone. “If you want I could drop you home” suggested Mr Diver “thanks” Kate replied. They both got into the car and drove back to Kate’s house.

__Friday 10 June 2011__

“Beep beep beep” the alarm clock bussed. “shut up” moaned Kate as smashed her hand on the alarm clock. Kate was just about to go back to sleep when her mum shouted “Kate it’s time to get up now or you’ll be late for school.” “It’s only 6:30 can I just have ten more minutes” “no!” her mum yelled back as she was walking into Kates room. Mum looked at Kate half a sleep in her bed and ripped off her cosy covers and told her again to get up. She left and Kate slowly sat up. “I wished we had a day off today” as she gradually made her way to get dressed.

When she had probally woke up and got dressed she headed down stairs. She glanced up at the time “oh no i’v only got ten minutes until the bus comes.” Sounding worried. She quickly rushed about putting her books and lunch in her bag. “Have you eaten breakfast yet” asked mum “theres no time” replied Kate in a hurry. While running down the street to bus stop the bus wizzed straight past her without noticing. She stood there looking annoyed, then she quickly ran back home to her mum.

“Mum mum I missed the bus can you give me a ride” They both sprinted to the car. “Oh no” “what mum” “I don’t have any petrol you'll just have to bike to school “fine” replied Kate. She quickly got out the car and headed to the garage.

Once she had eventually found her bike and was off. As she was heading out she saw the time was 7:30 and you have to be in school by 8:00. She peddled up and down the hill as fast as she could, but suddenly she heard something strange first it was a small bang and then she felt the bike sinking. Kate had a puncher. “Thats great” she said to herself in a sarcastic tone.

When she was just about to start walking she felt something fall on her shoulder she didn’t notice and then carryed on, Suddenly a huge rain drop fell on top of her head from then it start pouring down. Walking miserably in the pouring rain Kate a car would come and take her home to her nice and warm bed.

__Thursday 9 June 2011__

“Beep beep beep” the alarm clock bussed. “shut up” moaned Kate as smashed her hand on the alarm clock. Kate was just about to go back to sleep when her mum shouted “Kate it’s time to get up now or you’ll be late for school.” “It’s only 6:30 can I just have ten more minutes” “no!” her mum yelled back as she was walking into Kates room. Mum looked at Kate half a sleep in her bed and ripped off her cosy covers and told her again to get up. She left and Kate slowly sat up. “I wished we had a day off today” as she gradually made her way to get dressed.

When she had probally woke up and got dressed she headed down stairs. She glanced up at the time “oh no i’v only got ten minutes until the bus comes.” Sounding worried. She quickly rushed about putting her books and lunch in her bag. “Have you eaten breakfast yet” asked mum “theres no time” replied Kate in a hurry. While running down the street to bus stop the bus wizzed straight past her without noticing. She stood there looking annoyed, then she quickly ran back home to her mum.

“Mum mum I missed the bus can you give me a ride” They both sprinted to the car. “Oh no” “what mum” “I don’t have any petrol you'll just have to bike to school “fine” replied Kate. She quickly got out the car and headed to the garage.

__Monday 23rd May 2011__

“Monkey stop being so scared and try and get up the tree” yelled monkeys brother george “no I will fall and break something” monkey replied. Monkey didn’t learn to climb trees when he was growing up and now he is too scared to even try. Monkey spent everyday watching his three brothers climb and swing on branches.

One night there was a big storm and the 4 brothers had nowhere to go. They all went searching for shelter. George yelled out “theres a tree hut up there” So they all made there way up the tree except Monkey. “I’m not going up there i’ll just keep on looking. So monkey kept on searching. As the storm went on it got harder to see through the fog. Suddenly fell.

When he woke up there was a small furry animal next to him. “Hello i’m Cat who are you” Monkey said in confused voice “where am I”. Cat explained about how monkey had fallen and that he had dragged him into shelter. The cat had already had been out hunting and had caught some mice and had found some bananas for monkey.

The cat got monkey his breakfast and monkey told him about the night before. When monkey told cat that he couldn’t climb trees cat was really shocked and said that he is going to teach him.

That day the both of them went out looking for a good tree to climb. After a fews hours of searching cat spotted a small tree “theres a good tree monkey will start small” So cat climbed up the tree while monkey was still wondering whether to go up “are you sure, it doesn’t look that safe” monkey yelled up to cat. “yes now at leased try to get all here” Cat came down and showed monkey what to do.

All that day cat was trying to get monkey to go up the tree. Finally monkey made it up to the top of the 2 meter tree. Monkey was very excited. “So now you know how to do it will climb higher next time” shouted from the bottom of the tree.

Monkey talked the whole way home about how had made it to the top. Cat said that tomorrow they will try to climb higher. When they got back to the shelter monkey spotted his brothers in the distance up a tree. He ran as fast as he could shouting out to them. They turned around “how did you get up here” sounding surprised “I learnt how to climb” The brothers all smiled and said that they had been searching for him. “Now that we have found you we better be getting home” said the brothers. Monkey looked at cat he looked very upset as his only friend was about to leave. Then monkey said that cat should join them, so cat had a long think and replied happily “okay”.

That afternoon they headed back and monkey told the story of how cat had taught him how to climb.

__Thursday 19th May 2011__

__Story__

“Monkey stop being so scared and try and get up the tree” yelled monkeys brother george “no I will fall and break something” monkey replied. Monkey didn’t learn to climb trees when he was growing up and now he is too scared to even try. Monkey spent everyday watching his three brothers climb and swing on branches.

One night there was a big storm and the 4 brothers had nowhere to go. They all went searching for shelter. George yelled out “theres a tree hut up there” So they all made there way up the tree except Monkey. “I’m not going up there i’ll just keep on looking. So monkey kept on searching. As the storm went on it got harder to see through the fog. Suddenly fell.

When he woke up there was a small furry animal next to him. “Hello i’m Cat who are you” Monkey said in confused voice “where am I”. Cat explained about how monkey had fallen and that he had dragged him into shelter. The cat had already had been out hunting and had caught some mice and had found some bananas for monkey.

The cat got monkey his breakfast and monkey told him about the night before. When monkey told cat that he couldn’t climb trees cat was really shocked and said that he is going to teach him. That day the both of them went out looking for a good tree.

After a fews hours of searching cat spotted a small tree “theres a good tree monkey will start small” So cat climbed up the tree while monkey was still wondering whether to go up “are you sure, it doesn’t look that safe” monkey yelled up to cat. “yes now at leased try to get all here” Cat came down and showed monkey what to do.

All that day cat was trying to get monkey to go up the tree. Finally monkey made it up to the top of the 2 meter tree. Monkey was very excited. “So now you know how to do it will climb higher next time” shouted from the bottom of the tree.

__Wednesday 18th May 2011__

__Story__

“Monkey stop being so scared and try and get up the tree” yelled monkeys brother george “no I will fall and break something” monkey replied. Monkey didn’t learn to climb trees when he was growing up and now he is too scared to even try. Monkey spent everyday watching his three brothers climb and swing on branches.

One night there was a big storm and the 4 brothers had nowhere to go. They all went searching for shelter. George yelled out “theres a tree hut up there” So they all made there way up the tree except Monkey. “I’m not going up there i’ll just keep on looking. So monkey kept on searching. As the storm went on it got harder to see through the fog. Suddenly fell.

When he woke up there was a small furry animal next to him. “Hello i’m Cat who are you” Monkey said in confused voice “where am I”. Cat explained about how monkey had fallen and that he had dragged him into shelter. The cat had already had been out hunting and had caught some mice and had found some bananas for monkey.

The cat got monkey his breakfast and monkey told him about the night before. When monkey told cat that he couldn’t climb trees cat was really shocked and said that he is going to teach him. That day the both of them went out looking for a good tree.

After a fews hours of searching cat spotted a small tree “theres a good tree monkey will start small” So cat climbed up the tree while monkey was still wondering whether to go up “are you sure, it doesn’t look that safe” monkey yelled up to cat. “yes now at lease try to get all here” Cat came down and showed monkey what to do.

All that day cat was trying to get monkey to go up the tree. Finally monkey made it up to the top of the 2 meter tree. Monkey was very excited

The story about monkey is very interesting and I think that you have thought about why you were writing the story and what type of audience you are writing for.

__Monday 16 May 2011__

__Plot__ Monkey never learnt to climb trees and was to scared to try. monkeys family went climbing trees one day and monkey wandered off and got lost. monkey ran into a stray cat and made friends. cat taught monkey how to climb trees and hunt. monkey grew up with cat but one day when climbing trees with cat he saw his family they had been searching for him for months. monkey and cat joined the family.

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<span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">“Monkey stop being so scared and try and get up the tree” yelled monkeys brother george “no I will fall and break something” monkey replied. Monkey didn’t learn to climb trees when he was growing up and now he is too scared to even try. Monkey spent everyday watching his three brothers climb and swing on branches.

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